The Lesson: A Short Story
Breathless, eager and anxious, Avyam could not take his eyes away
from the laptop screen now. He also couldn’t help gazing at the wall clock
along with the impatient click on the mobile. He never knew it that sitting on
his couch could make him feel like running a marathon of emotions, of cravings
that he thought he would hide. Today, he was about to see Mira online and he
started writing a mail to her because Mira liked to read his long mails. Dating
someone at the age of twenty was not unusual but despite of loving someone so
passionately; living with a dual personality was strange. Avyam spent so many
days and nights with Mira. He was still not interested to name their relation
as that of lovers. Physical union was never realized as a means to something- marriage
was not at all in his mind. He loved Mira in his own way. Today, Mira was out
of town for her cousin’s marriage.
Mira had her own lifestyle with no inhibitions, no hiding, no duality
and no loud claims. She smoked sometimes and often loved to share drinks with
her friends. Avyam was captivated with her outspoken spirit but Mira was still his
secret because his social circle did not approve of unreticent and candid girls.
Mira was all that Avyam had always aspired to become. Avyam thought that his
upbringing with over protective parents had made him indecisive and
unpredictable. His wavering and
irresolute disposition was unalike Mira’s steadfast and unflinching spirit of
life. He had always yearned to receive impassioned love from his lady love but
now the sway of Mira’s love expressions made him burn and freeze.
Avyam met Mira two years ago at his friend’s birthday party. Little
did he realize that the initial fascination would soon lead him into an
enchantment pool. Over thinking is a curse and Avyam was now suffocated with
this bane. Avyam always pushed himself up with this curse. Mira was still
happier either in his company or in her own life. To be happy with Mira or to
share her as a life moment in his circle, was Avyam’s big dilemma. Mira’s
message on the messenger shook the musings of Avyam abruptly. He was
overexcited to see Mira’s charming face. Mira showed her delight on receiving
his mail. For the first time, she looked grim. Before Avyam could ask, Mira told
him that she would return after a fortnight because of the various counselings
she planned to attend to take admission in her masters.
Mira’s parents never objected to her choices and decisions in
her life. She felt it was because of this rare freedom given by them that
she could become a focussed adult. Many of her friends would marvel at her
independence and resolute will. Now after her graduation in commerce, she
wanted to pursue MBA from a well-acknowledged institute. Her only aim was
to get admission and her relation with Avyam could not tax her attention and
devotion towards reaching the aim. She decided not to return to the city and to
study harder for the various entrance tests. She wanted to cherish Avyam then
as a pleasant memory but Avyam was getting more hysterical with the mere
thought of losing her company. With
each passing day, Mira was turning into an enigma for Avyam. He lost interest in studies and life. Life for
him was a void with his little urge to fill the vacuum. His father was anxious
to get him into his business. Avyam was all the more weak- physically and
mentally. Impulsive and cynic he became within a couple of days.
This
whirlpool of emotions seized his psyche that he could no more decide how he
would continue his life. What did he want then? It never occurred to him that
gradually he was throwing himself into the abyss of mania and obsession. Could
his life be like a cheap ware that could be bargained with so much of unrest
and despair? Who would advise him? Mira? Life is unpredictable with many twists
and turns that moves the ride towards a completely different direction.
What Mira' presence could not do, her absence did it with more sweep and immensity.
Life is a strange mentor. It leads a person to a productive outlet when he/she is
not at all willing.
Some unknown power was at work for Avyam. How was it
possible then that in less than a month's time, he began to think about his
career and interest? As a graduate in Bio-Tech, his dream was to go into
research field and not just be a partner with his father. Sitting on his favourite couch today made him relived all the
past moments with so many achievements in his student life for his outstanding projects
and well-researched reports for which Mira was to be acknowledged somewhere. He
reminisced about Mira as a stimulant who aroused his dormant faculties to seek
his inner strength and identity that helped him look ahead in life.
Wonderful narrative, quite engaging with sublime fluidity ! Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the motivation
DeleteWow.....
ReplyDeleteThat's fantastic Jimmy......
You,
1. Entered the Lives of Teens Om Opposite poles,
2. Underlined The Responsibility of Worthy Parents,
3. Tore out at the Addiction of people on this Social Media
and
4. Unlike many who would've Ended with a Negative Connotation, So finely Refined Avyam and Made Mira an Angel of Blessings......!!!!!!
I just Loved It......!!!!!!
Please do Share on VOCH.....!!!!!
Kudos.......!!!!!!
Such a comprehensive analysis made my day
DeleteI am grateful
Yes, optimism defines my writings
This being my first story will always be very close to me
Your points of observation are indeed apt to my concerns as a writer
In fact, some surreptitiously serendipitous.
ReplyDeleteThat's probably you you as well in that category.
Some naturally shy away to shy in a corner of gleam light.
Rather that's that abstract world they love. Whimsically colouring a brand of world
they sideline themselves. A pinch of love even suffices, a bit of longing even beats the pain
or multiplies the joy...vice versa!
Jimmy come on, quick do some editing for a good magazine.
Pitambar Naik
I am humbled
DeleteImmense gratitude Pitambar for the Comprehensive feedback
Sure I will edit it for some good magazine